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Learning how to
talk about style, cadence, diction, and more
Directions: Read the following two passages. Using
the professional paragraphs describing Faulkner’s and Hemingway’s writing
styles as models, write full paragraph descriptions of the following two
passages. You may work on #3 in pairs/groups of 3. You must write a
description of #4 on your own.
Passage #3:
But mountains yes Rose did think about mountains and
about blue when it was on the mountains and feathers when clouds like
feathers were on the mountains and birds when one little bird and two little
birds and three and four and six and seven and ten and seventeen and thirty
or forty little birds all came flying and a big bird came flying and they
flew higher than the big bird and they came down and one and then two and
then five and then fifty of them came picking down on the head of the big
bird and slowly the big bird came falling down between the mountain and the
little birds all went home again.
G. Stein
Passage #4:
But it was the doors that annoyed her; every door was
left open… That windows should be open, and doors shut—simple as it was,
could none of them remember it? She would go into the maids’ bedrooms at
night and find them sealed like ovens, except for Marie’s, the Swiss girl,
who would rather go without a bath than without fresh air, but then as home,
she had said, “the mountains are so beautiful.” She had said that last
night looking out of the window with tears in her eyes. “The mountains are
so beautiful.” Her father was dying there, Mrs. Ramsay knew. He was
leaving them fatherless. Scolding and demonstrating (how to make a bed, how
to open a window, with hands that shut and spread like a Frenchwoman’s) all
had folded itself quietly about her, when the girl spoke, as, after a flight
through the sunshine the wings of a bird fold themselves quietly and the
blue of its plumage changes from bright steel to soft purple. She had stood
there silent for there was nothing to be said. He had cancer of the
throat. At the recollection—how she had stood there, how the girl had said
“At home the mountains are so beautiful,” and there was no hope, no hope
whatever, she had a spasm of irritation, and speaking sharply, said to
James, “Stand still. Don’t be tiresome,” so that he knew instantly that her
severity was real, and straightened his leg and she measured it.
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