name: ________________________________

Descriptive Exercise #1b                       

 Rewrite the following sentences to make them more descriptive.  Keep your great color list handy and consider connotations to add layers of associations and emotion to your description.

 

1)    The dog was cute and brown with a black nose.

 

 

 

2)    My grandmother has soft white hair.

 

 

 

3)    The sunset was so beautiful.

 

 

 

4)    I was so excited that I jumped up and down.